Anw lanjut dr yg sebelumnya (gk sengaja kekirim anjir) a bit feedback from me, u can be more explicit on actions and position changes (?), i found myself having a imagining on cern parts LOL, though the ones u already put in r amazing (i dont ask why i know this, like i said i read weirdest s) hope that helps lol ditunggu fic selanjutnya 😋

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