kak ren! i truly loves all your stories, keren keren banget semuanya and i already read all of em. but a little saran, maybe you can work on your dialog tags more? seperti mpatan koma dan titik setiap karakter selesai berbicara. “Iya aku suka,” bukan “Iya aku suka” (you need to add koma/titik sesuai mpatannya, bukan langsung ditutup tanda petik). pasti karya kakak lebih bisa dinikmati lagi. maaf kalo dirasa menyinggung , keep writing ya! you have such a good plot and ideas. Looking forward to your next story.

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